Nida 'Look at it this way'

         It would be great to get married in this year because it can make our family happiness, so it could be a good idea, but it might not be. I don't know, for it depends on our visa because it'll expire in November and we would like to stay here,so we have to spend a lot of money on a new diploma course and extend our visa before we'll get married.
        It would be excellent if we have enough money to do everything on the same time so I was worried about that. Even so, look at it this way. If we can extend our visa,we'll get married, but if not, we won't get it and put it off to next year or more than 2 years. (Nida, you are using your conjunctions well, but remember, two in a sentence is enough. Read the second half of this paragraph and shorten the sentences :) )